This has been a beautiful chapter, up to this page. In the first panel, his right hand is awkwardly placed. Then it appears she is behind him. And how did the geist get so big?
I’m glad you’ve been enjoying it, and thanks for pointing out the problems. Sometimes it’s hard to see things yourself until too late! The idea was that they were jumping across rooftops, one getting ahead and then the other, but obviously that wasn’t clear. Clarity can be a real killer in comics!
The Geist got big through the magical power of artistic license 🙂
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